Cave full of Secrets chap 1.
Posted January 21st, 2021 by Maggs101
by Lana
in Texas
January 23rd, 2021
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in Texas
January 23rd, 2021
Whenever dad left Matt and his sister along with their mom for a new life and never came back well, lets just say mom was pretty heart broken. They all were, but that was 7 years ago. Mom has been acting strange ever since dad left and it progressively got worse. It all started on a Wednesday night. Every Wednesday night they had a game night, but this Wednesday wasn't special like all the others. It was one that would change Brittany's and Matt's life forever.
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great story. I am very excited for the next chapter!
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It's not just a matter of trusting yourself but testing your abilities - Joseph Sugarman
This premise is fascinating. I'd suggest making this chapter longer! But you can always edit it later or just add a chapter and keep this as the prologue
Good yard,
(Warmest regards)
Snow
Hi Lana and welcome! I really like the beginning of this and I love the cliffhanger. I do agree with Snow that if this is a full chapter, it could be a bit longer. But, I am excited to see what happpens next!
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“There is something delicious about writing the first words of a story. You never quite know where they'll take you.” - Beatrix Potter
ofc! it is short but chapter 2 will be longer so dont worry!