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Dancing in the Flames

Dancing in the Flames

Posted November 9th, 2012 by Raindrops

by Rainy
in my dreams, flying with my angel friend.

January 5th, 2013

 

Your head was on fire

Burning

With the flames of the devil

You held yourself up

Like nothin' could ever bring you down

 

You're a building  on fire

All flames to yourself

Like you were

Unburnable

 

You dance within the flames,

Hold your hands up,

Let the world spin,

Let your laugh soar

Life is  just messed up

Let the fire grow

Up into the sky

You know you won't get burned

 

Hold his hands

Look into the sun

Treat him like a god, girl

But he's worse than dirt,

You're blind, girl

Blind to the rage, girl

The pleas, girl

The pain, girl

The screams, girl

 

You smile like a demon, girl

Your mind is broken

Shattered from the pain

Like a cat, girl

Stalking your prey

Strike them once

Let them suffer

See the pain

Feel relief

They're a mouse

You can kill

 

Hold up the broken mirror

Let loose a broken smile

Make the children run.

 

You're in love with the fire

Infatuated with the flames

You got ten degree burns, girl

Yet, you think you're free

 

You strike a match 

Put it to their faces

Just to see the pain

Lit a match

Throw it down

Burning to the ground

 

The walls are broken

No one there to fight

You let the devil in, girl

How can you not see?

Blind girl

Blind girl

Burning up

 

No pain inside

Only lust

You're empty girl

Just a husk

All your pain

In the fire

Hear the screams

Risin' higher

Silent plea of help

 

Let the music play, girl

Scream out in rage, girl

Fire in the rooms

Fire in your eyes

Burning in the pits of hell, girl

You never knew

Had to ask

What to do

 

Feel the pain, girl

Bubblin' all inside

All your soul gone

Seepin' in your pain

 

Lit a match

Throw it down

Burning all around

 

Let it rain, girl

Wash your pain

All away

Scream in rage,

Find a light

Let it burn

A silent plea of help

Dry your tears

Don't sucumb

Light a match

Strike it once

Let the children run.


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That...scares me. D: XD

That...scares me. D: XD Like....What if someone was addicted to the flames? O_O

XD Anyway, awesome poem. :D Especially the ryhthym, it's epic. :D

Thanks for entering!

Posted by Cherrybomb on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 10:06
Thank you! I'm glad it

Thank you! I'm glad it scared you, although the meaning is not literal! Ima go edit this now.

Posted by Nostalgia (Rain... on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 11:43
It's still epic. :D

It's still epic. :D

Posted by Cherrybomb on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 12:35
Thank you! You are still

Thank you! You are still epic XD

 

This poem; it's about a school shooting :( 

Posted by Raindrops on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 12:38
XD Thanks, then. *reflects

XD Thanks, then. *reflects your words so they land on you* :D

Yeah, I reread it (after you edited) and I know what it means now. D: So sad...x_x But awesome. ^_^ *faved*

Posted by Cherrybomb on Sat, 11/10/2012 - 16:56
That is seriously disturbing

That is seriously disturbing and seriously one of my all-time favorite poems now. :DD I just adore the topic, the flow, the everything. Chills ran throughout my entire body reading it and picturing it. (I especially like the thing about smiling into a broken mirror and letting the children run. :3)  This was sincerely epic and is now in my favorites. :3 Nicely done, girl! (Or, um, I SUPPOSE you're a girl. xD)

Posted by C.T. on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 15:39
…EPIC! Amazing!

…EPIC! Amazing! Faved. :D

...........

Posted by Confuzzled on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 16:53
(To C. T.) Aw thank you! I

(To C. T.)

Aw thank you! I am glad my poem portrayed that! I made this up by sing a little song with words that burst into my strange little brain, and wrote what I said down. Thank you, thank you! I strife (or strive, not sure) for epicness! 

Thank you so much. You just made me smile!

(To Confuzzled.) Aww thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Posted by Raindrops on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 20:11
That was absolutely

That was absolutely terrifying. And for that, I LOVED it. So dark, so creepy... FAVED!

Okay, here's my theory: Nicki Minaj and Lady Gaga are actually Capitol citizens who couldn't stand The Hunger Games, so they invented a time machine and traveled back to our time and became pop stars. O.O

Posted by Lena on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 18:59
Thank you! 

Thank you! 

Posted by Nostalgia (Rain... on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 20:02
For some reason, I'd like to

For some reason, I'd like to experience that feeling...not in a literal way, of course not.
Epykal poem, overall.

Fear cuts deeper than swords~Syrio Forel / Arya Stark.

Posted by Darquesse (Lauren) on Fri, 11/09/2012 - 20:54
Thank you!  

Thank you!

 

Posted by Nostalgia (Rain... on Sat, 11/10/2012 - 09:37
That was frightening. Very,

That was frightening. Very, very, frightening.

VERY.

It was epic. :D

Posted by Claire on Sun, 11/18/2012 - 16:58
Well, thank you! I pride

Well, thank you! I pride myself in scaring all my readers ;)

Posted by Raindrops on Tue, 11/20/2012 - 15:28
Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh.

Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh. O_o
¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously how do you wrote such meaningful and stunning and beautiful and spectacular and amazing and GAHHH poetry??????
This is WOW tenfold and I think I just broke the favorite button!!!!! XD
In the morning, there will be a link to this in mg bio because this is just so freaking awesome. Gahh! Toooooo awesome.
I'm not really sure how this came about but I perceived the tale of someone with Stockholm Syndrome. You know where someone gets kidnapped and then joins their kidnappers? O_o
Scary and beautiful. Just so wonderful that I think it is indescribable. ^_^
I. Will. Never. Ever. Ever. Everrrrrrrrrrrrr. EVER. Get enough of your awe-inspiring poetry. You are wonderful. ^_^

~Want to find out more about me? Here's my bio: http://www.kidpub.com/users/jomarch ~

Posted by Rour (Ellie) on Fri, 02/15/2013 - 23:17
ERMAGERD. Another one of

ERMAGERD. Another one of your amazing comments that I never replied to. That never gets old.

This poem is the one that I posted a while ago. It was my first okay poem, and I was so exhilerated by it! Now it's like, could've been better. Weird how that happens.

Because of all my GAHH encouragement. I know that question is rhetorical, but I'm still answering. Pandora, especially Florence + The Machine. Emotions. The sky. Gahh like that. Ellie, you are so freaking amazing!

The fav button is broken? I'll call the repair man, don't worry! xD

You shouldn't. It's so. I'm honored. You're fantastical comments that are so freaking beautifully GAHH are enough. :D

No, but I'll google it. xD

Scary and beautiful. Those words are forever in my heart. Kind of remind me of life.

And same to you with your comments. :DDDDDDDDDDDDD

 

 

Posted by RainyOblivion on Sat, 02/16/2013 - 11:03
Oh my gosh I LOVE Florence +

Oh my gosh I LOVE Florence + The Machine!!!!! Especially "Never Let Me Go". The emotion is just so palpable. But yes, that was a rhetorical question. Although I'm glad you answered it! XD
Scary and beautiful... I guess that does define life. O.o
Aww… thanks! :DDDDDDD

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Posted by Rour (Ellie) on Sat, 02/16/2013 - 13:00

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