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In the Deep Dark Lane

In the Deep Dark Lane

Posted March 18th, 2017 by FIFAKB

by Sofia
in Ontario

March 18th, 2017
In a deep dark lane,
where only people who were sane,
would wander through,
for there was a rumor that was true:
 
A million years ago,
there was a strong water flow,
wherever you go.
 
There was a boy who hated it all,
and liked to make others fall,
he became very dark,
and he made his mark,
by getting rid of every happy thought,
so everyone began to rot.
 
Then he took every dark thing,
and made it into a ring--
that could conjure storms and make rain--
and he hid it in a deep dark lane.

 


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Wow. Somemetimes I don't

Wow. Somemetimes I don't really like poetry but I loved this. I felt like it was really symbolic, and (I don't know if this is how you meant it to seem), but to me, this is telling a story about how in the world, there used to be water everywhere. Then there was this boy who hated everything and wanted to basically destroy people's lives (hence the poeple rottting). Then he took every dark thing in the world and made it into this power only he could control (the power to control the remaining water supply). Good work!

Posted by Elora on Sun, 03/19/2017 - 18:11

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