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Fire

Fire

Posted July 11th, 2017 by Anonymous

by Keeahna
in Texas

July 11th, 2017

Fire

With your oranges and

blues

And many other hues

Why do you burn?

You exist for the sole purpose of

Hurting and

Destroying

Fire 

With your beautiful

Flames

Comsume me with

your desire

Fire

Comsume me until

I am

nothing

Consume me until

I am 

gone

Let me feel

The pain

Let me feel the pain that is 

Intolerable

unbearable

Fire

let your whispers and crackles

of 

Death

Entice me

Fire 

lure me with your 

Beauty

As a siren does 

A sailor

Fire 

Wrap me in your white hot

Embrace

And never 

Let me 

go

Lull me to sleep

With your deadly gaze

Sleep

O blissful

Sleep.


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I just have this image of

I just have this image of some wicked-cool fantasy character literally on fire. TuT

 

Cool poem!

 

"You can't be grey." - SilverSnowLeopard, 'Ignite'

Posted by Schismsre on Tue, 07/11/2017 - 16:27
Wonderfull!

Wonderfull!

Posted by wildcat on Wed, 07/12/2017 - 11:32
Wow, amazing. It's simple

Wow, amazing. It's simple but it give me really good imagery and it tells a story.

Posted by Elora on Wed, 07/12/2017 - 13:11
I love this, I kinda think

I love this, I kinda think of fire as a friendly thing that sometimes loses its temper, but the idea of it being evil is really great. I think that this poem gives very good imagery. awesome!

"Be yourself... everyone else is already taken." -Oscar Wilde

Posted by Incognito on Thu, 07/13/2017 - 00:35
Vivid imagery. You are a

Vivid imagery. You are a talented poet! Keep it up.

Posted by AuthorMind(Justin) on Fri, 07/14/2017 - 16:19

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