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god vs. the creation

god vs. the creation

Posted April 17th, 2017 by Lily09

by elliot

April 18th, 2017
i feel so unholy,
with fangs bared and claws ready to tear.
i feel so unholy,
drowning under the weight of my own defense.
and you seem so holy,
with blonde hair and a heart to spare.
you seem so holy,
rising to the portrait of reality.
i wish i could stop falling out of love with who i am.
i wish i could stop falling in love with who you are not. 

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holy crap this is so

holy crap this is so perfectly put, so jeaous of ur writing skills smh


---- love life and peace out <3

Posted by esther on Mon, 04/17/2017 - 18:05
Nice poetry. But God isn't

Nice poetry. But God isn't against his creation........he is for his creation. If he was against his creation, why are we still alive? I once wondered the same thing. You are right though. We can never be good enough. God is too perfect. So that's why he sent Jesus to pay the price for us. Even though i believe in God dosen't meen i haven't sinned. I have sinned so badly so many times i can't count them all. But guess what? God already took care of that. SIn is Sin. It dosen't matter how big....or how small.

and btw, u can never out fall God's love. It may feel like it, but he is right behind u ready to push u back up. Just ask him sometime. at least try it once. Think of the worst thing anyone has ever done. They still couldn't out fall God's love.

You don't have to believe in what i just said, just think about it. :)


Posted by waverunner on Mon, 04/17/2017 - 20:13
this isnt abt god its called

this isnt abt god

its called a metaphor

thank you though

Posted by Elliot on Mon, 04/17/2017 - 20:57
thank you smh dont be

thank you smh dont be jealous urs are better @esther

Posted by Lily09 on Tue, 04/18/2017 - 15:24
dude! you posted!   also i

dude! you posted!


also i love this!

Posted by Elias on Tue, 04/18/2017 - 00:39
thank you!!

thank you!!

Posted by Elliot on Tue, 04/18/2017 - 15:24

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