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Hey can y'all possibly read The Accident and give me honest feedback? Thanks!

Hey can y'all possibly read The Accident and give me honest feedback? Thanks!

Posted September 28th, 2019 by chicken123

by Ava #1
in Michigan

September 28th, 2019

So I feel like my writing is super bad and I would love it if you guys could possibly give me A LOT of criticism on The Accident. Thanks!  :)


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it's not bad writing. the

it's not bad writing. the only thing (and i struggle with this too!) is chapter sizes. i'd try to plan out all the points you have to hit in the chapter, and dedicate small paragraphs to each one instead of putting it all together. it's what i do, and it usually works out.

-that other kid

Posted by indygoes (kayla) on Mon, 09/30/2019 - 09:44
It's really good Keep

It's really good Keep writing!!!!

Posted by Fire Dragon 74 on Tue, 10/01/2019 - 12:18
you should really keep

you should really keep writting

Posted by Fire Dragon 74 on Tue, 10/01/2019 - 12:20

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