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Posted September 28th, 2019 by chicken123
So I feel like my writing is super bad and I would love it if you guys could possibly give me A LOT of criticism on The Accident. Thanks! :)
it's not bad writing. the only thing (and i struggle with this too!) is chapter sizes. i'd try to plan out all the points you have to hit in the chapter, and dedicate small paragraphs to each one instead of putting it all together. it's what i do, and it usually works out.
-that other kid
It's really good Keep writing!!!!
you should really keep writting
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