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Hold Me. Another song i am writing.

Hold Me. Another song i am writing.

Posted April 4th, 2018 by waverunner

by Sally
in a March to The Sea

April 4th, 2018

(So I have been writing a series of songs that i am going to play on the ukuele, and possibly perform.)

Tonight I am sad,

Tonight I am lonely.

The demons are screaming,

And I need you to hold me.

Day after day,

Night after night,

Hope slips away,

Love turns to fright.

If you were here,

Right by my side,

Could I find the part of me,

Who I thought had died?

Tonight I am sad,

Tonight I am lonely.

The demons are screaming,

And I need you to hold me.

 


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This is great! I’d buy if

This is great! I’d buy if it hit the stores!

Do you know what Angelica said, when she read what you'd done? She said: "You've married and Icarus. He's flown to close to the sun."

Posted by Rambouten101 on Wed, 04/04/2018 - 18:41
This is beautiful! Not sure

This is beautiful! Not sure what the rhythm of the piece is, but I'd maybe change the word "who" in the 12th line to "that", or cut it all together? Maybe that's just me. Otherwise, love it!

Posted by ~ cedar ~ on Thu, 04/05/2018 - 02:54
Thank you guys!! 

Thank you guys!! smiley

Posted by Some girl idek on Thu, 04/05/2018 - 14:06

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