if at first you don't succeed
Posted September 3rd, 2013 by BlueMi
in conceivable! (you keep using that word... I do not think it means what you think it means.)
September 3rd, 2013
this is just a little barf I wrote in honor of my friend <3 she liked it so I decided to post it.
every failure has a story,
no one wants to hear.
you’re hiding in your bathroom
trying to cry away the fear.
and finally when that day is dead,
you’ll think it’s finally through.
yet turn around and there it is,
staring back at you.
tomorrow, they say, just wait,
it’s only one more day.
they don’t understand you,
it’s like a game they play.
if at first you don’t succeed,
society will never heed.
they won’t blame themselves, but greed,
and you’ll be left to sit alone and
bleed.
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Pokey, you are SUCH an amazing poet! o.o How you manage to take such a sad message and put it in such a beautiful way I will never know.
and you’ll be left to sit alone and
bleed.
Brillant. Just...brilliant.
^_^
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"And the wolf will actually reside for a while with the male lamb, and...even the lion will eat straw just like the bull." —Isaiah 11:6, 7
Darling, how do you even rhyme I mean o.O like awesome poetry but RHYMING with a poem like this how do you even >.>
Also it was amazing and perfect and flawless and do I know your friend probs not but yeah *Flails*
"Funerals are for the living."- TheAshWolf
I adore your poetry.
How do you rhyme and not sound comical I don't know._.
Haha and I see how a friend would appreciate this (x
Fear cuts deeper than swords~Syrio Forel / Arya Stark.
I've never ever ever seen a good poem on KidPub that rhymes, until today. This is amazing, honestly, and it scares me how good you are. ^_^