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Leo~ she's of fire

Leo~ she's of fire

Posted February 13th, 2018 by Billy

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by Briana
in New York

February 13th, 2018


a zodiac poem type thing




She is of fire

She is of light

Her heart is a fuse

About to ignite

Her mind is mirror

Reflecting her pain

Her hands are delicate worn and stained

She takes his breath away

She’s wild at heart

But she’s one to fall apart

Please love her dearly

Tend to her heart

But don’t bother coming

If you plan to depart

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This is a cool idea, and I

This is a cool idea, and I do like it!
The rhythm is a little bit off, starting about halway through. Ut feels like there is a line missing.
Great job! Super creative! Keep writing!!

Life is tough, darling, but so are you. ~Stephanie Bennett-Henry

Posted by elderlyteen{HawkEye} on Mon, 02/19/2018 - 17:45

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