little starry eyes ((for once not a classical music reference whoa))
Posted February 22nd, 2015 by meerkat
in euphoria
May 5th, 2015
a/n: please never say that no one loves you. because people really do, and i do, and all you have to do is get up and look around.
you've noticed her once, but you never said hi
for your eyes were so dull and you constantly cried
and she sat down beside you and wanted to stay
but you were always too sad to think what to say.
when she held out her hand you abruptly drew back
for kindness would just give you panic attacks
and she smiled with the light of a million bright stars
yet you would not even look on from afar.
she fell in love with you despite all your tears
and she'd give up so much just to have you near
but you saw her bright eyes as beacons of warning
and you were too afraid to tell her good morning.
day after day she'd come sit down beside you
and try to clear up that dark sadness inside you
but you never did truly believe you'd get better
and refused to write her so much as a letter.
but she'd never give up, as she'd been there before
and she wanted you to know what you have in store
but you never could see the future as bright
you refused to try changing, with all of your might.
she'd never stop trying to clear you of your strife
to be a bright light in your worry-fraught life
but you closed all your windows and replaced them with walls
and the sadness got to you and made you feel small.
and you'd never admit it, but she'd left a spark
right there, in your heart, where it always was dark
and everyone knows that sparks create flames
that glitter and dance and don't leave you the same.
and she lies awake hoping that you'll be okay
that someday your sadness will all burn away
and sooner or later your tears and your cries
will give way to stunningly bright starry eyes.
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
I SOLEMNLY SWEAR TO SMACK YOU AGAIN IF YOU EVER SAY YOURE NOT GOOD AT POEMING BC THIS
THIS IS IT OK
THIS IS AN INCREDIBLE AMAZING UPLIFTING FAB POEM <33333333333333333
LIKE
THIS POSITIVITY IS CUTE AND FLOOFY AND MAKES ME FEEL WARM AND FUZZY AND EVERYONE WILL AGREE WITH ME BC THIS IS TOO STUNNING NOT TO AND I THINK WE ALL NEED THIS <3333
also can i just say that those rhymes are amazing and flowy and seemingly effortless?? <33333
this is faved forever and ever and ily and this and everything <333333
YEAH I SHALL NOW SQEUAL AND FANGIRL AND FWOOF U AND <3333333333 /gwompie/
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beauty and breaking are synonymous to each other because the more you have the less you want and the less you want the more pointless life becomes to the point where you have no reason to live and all you want is to make a crack in your flawless facade
/is fwoofed and makes a turtle face/ swavanee-sempaiiiiii <33
yeah idek i just felt like writing a happy thing and formatting/disguising it as a sad vent to cheer ppl up becausee this whole website needs a break from the constant stream of sadness and angst and depression so this was what i came up with :)ok fine i can't angsty-poem. i may or may not be able to not-angsty-poem. that sentence made no sense. yay.
/cuddles you endlessly/
hi if you are reading this signature you're not worthless and you deserve to live another day!! :) (also i should probably be practicing or working now loll)
Amazing. Just... amazing.
I honestly don't have any more words to describe this. I usually find rhyming poems kind of boring, and prefer freelance, but... whoa, this was plain spectacular.
Definitely faved.
Writing is not something you learn. It is something you are born with.
thanks so much(: i don't even poem that often, but i was just so desperate for postivity...
here is your friendly reminder to do your homework, drink water, eat food, take your meds, get some rest, and love yourself! :) you are not worthless and you desere to live another day!
WELL AREN'T YOU JUST A NICE PERSON!!
the rhyming is nice too! and psst there's a typo here:
for your eys were so dull and you constantly cried
And you don't have to 8e a good person to 8e a hero.
/kills my keyboard/ thanks for pointing that out! :D
here is your friendly reminder to do your homework, drink water, eat food, take your meds, get some rest, and love yourself! :) you are not worthless and you desere to live another day!
thank you for writing this. this is cute and uplifting and it fLOWS SO WELL
the rhymes aren't perfect but they don't have to be. it totally works
agreeing 100% with sravani here <333
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to live is to fall asleep, to die is to awaken
thanks so much :)
here is your friendly reminder to do your homework, drink water, eat food, take your meds, get some rest, and love yourself! :) you are not worthless and you desere to live another day!
aw that's really sweet of you
this is so cute and uplifting *o* thank youu it's exactly what i needed :')
*~Crossroads~*
ahhh i'm so glad you thought that! that's exactly what i was going for! thanks c:
here is your friendly reminder to do your homework, drink water, eat food, take your meds, get some rest, and love yourself! :) you are not worthless and you desere to live another day!
OMPJ... THIS IS THE MOST AWESOME THING I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is complete epicness! FAVED.
A good friend would bail you out of jail
but your best friend would be the one sitting next to you saying "That was fun!"
~ Me