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My Mother Who Loves Me (Friends Version)

My Mother Who Loves Me (Friends Version)

Posted April 7th, 2019 by wolflover37

by Allison
in Tennessee

April 7th, 2019

My Mother,

Who loves me,

Doesn't just,

Do chores,

She teaches,

Me right,

From wrong,

 

 

My Mother,

Who loves me,

Has long,

Dirty blonde hair,

And blue eyes,

Is the only one ,

For me,

I have,

Dirty blonde hair,

And blue eyes,

 

 

My Mother,

Who loves me,

Is perfect,


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Aww, this is really nice and

Aww, this is really nice and cute! Only thing is I don’t think you need a comma at the end of every line. Otherwise I love it! :)
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Posted by tis.the.season.alem on Mon, 04/08/2019 - 19:17
That was really nice I loved

That was really nice I loved it my moms birthday was a couple of days ago and this would be a perfect thing to put in a card  keep it up

Posted by Roisin on Thu, 04/11/2019 - 12:26
It's cool that you have such

It's cool that you have such a great realtionship with ur mom! Alot of kids don't.

Posted by Cherith on Thu, 04/11/2019 - 13:04

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