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Ode to the Dallas View

Ode to the Dallas View

Posted September 12th, 2017 by GingerFur

by ~Tomato_Anxiety~
in Ireterra

September 23rd, 2017


proud o' me?! I FINALLY POSTED! yep... anyway, to get on to this poem. I wrote it for an assignment... :P



Ode to the Dallas View



Reunion Tower, a great place.

But, I didn’t enjoy getting up here.


I hate elevators.


I got a burger.

The juicy meat,

The bun as soft as a pillow,

and, savory toppings.

Don’t even get me started about dessert.


The Dallas view,


The Dallas view.

We got there at the perfect time, sunset.

The sky, a stunning watercolor painting.




It was just breathtaking,

I took too many pictures.

I thought it couldn’t get any better,

But it did.


After dinner we went on the observation deck,

and I gazed at the view from a new perspective.

The stars sparkled and partied through

the night sky;

The city was lit up by blinding lights of all different colors.


What a sight,

That Dallas view.

The skyscrapers towering over

the people who looked like ants in comparison.

Cars rushed through the streets like

water flooding a town,

And I took it all in.


How remarkable,

That Dallas view.

I watched tiny people go about their

normal lives,

But for me,

This magical experience

Was not a normal night.


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I really love the imagery~

I really love the imagery~ good job!!

{i want to prove that we aren't smoldering in this small world.}

Posted by King Explosion ... on Thu, 09/14/2017 - 09:56
tank u! <=> Blah, blah,

tank u!

<=> Blah, blah, blah, crazy words, mustache. -Pidge imitating Coran <=>

Posted by Kitty ^~^ on Thu, 09/14/2017 - 21:00

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