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A rap to my older brother Warning: contains swearing

A rap to my older brother Warning: contains swearing

Posted March 10th, 2019 by pheonixa12

by Ava
in Cork

March 29th, 2019

This is a rap to a big piece of crap. Ok this isn't that good but hey I thought I would post it anyway


HEY!Why are you in my life?

and so you know if you ever get a wife

I hope you treat her right

not like me 

But hey I'm fine


If I say somethin then the first words outta your mouth are ''Shut up''

And I start thinkin ''am I good enough''

But then I say...



My opinions are valid

and your callin me fat?

well you could use a salad 




I ain't making it for you

Your sexist piece of shit and your girlfriend don't love you

Oh wait!

Don't ya have one?No?


Good....The girls in your school have common sense 

I can't say as much for you though

Cuz you remind me of a dirty old fence

I hope your trampled by cattle 

Oh haha you just tripped on a rattle


Oh you think I'm being mean

Seeing what you've done to me 

I think even you would agree.....


You deserve my rage 

My revenge

But not my time of day


I know you don't give a shit 

So I know you won't be lookin

But still.....


I'm roastin

Without you even knowin 

And it's amazing

How little of a shit you give

when I talk about it 

And all the things that you did


So that's my rap about my piece of shit brother                   I don't quite hate him but I hate him.It's weird  Anyway hope you liked it or even managed to get to the end  

I hope whoever reading this has a great day [or night] Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee



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You deserve my rageĀ  My

You deserve my rage 

My revenge

But not my time of day

Love this stanza! Also, in the stanza before that, you missed an e in "seeing"

Posted by echo (*Jill*) on Tue, 03/12/2019 - 06:34
That rap is dope as I told

That rap is dope as I told you this and i'm telling you again some boys really suck and you know who i'm talking about anyway to any boy who's reading this I hope your not that bad so no hard feelingsyes

Posted by Roisin on Wed, 03/13/2019 - 14:13
They're alot of good guy's

They're alot of good guy's out there, I've literaly got the best big bro ever. I hope somhow y'all will be friends. Belive it can happen. Good poem by the way.

Posted by Cherith on Thu, 04/11/2019 - 13:09

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