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For some: No big deal, for others: a dream come true. Please read.

Posted January 10th, 2011 by writer97

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by NightOwl0_0 (a girl who is
in a whirlpool of thoughts; trying to decide who she likes better: Finnick or Peeta *sigh*

January 10th, 2011

Inspired by Max's new post titled ' :( :('

Hey Kidpub! I really am coming to my senses. This 'idea' is inspired by our fellow Kidpubber, Max. I know what it fekt like when nobody reviewed my stories. I felt that I didn't succeed. I felt that I didn't deserve a review. I felt like there are more important stories to be reviewed than mine. I felt very upset. But then somebody reviewed them and it really made me happy.  Most of them or perhaps all of them had to do with me asking them and the reviewer offering them. So here I am, with an offer. An offer that will make you happy. If I were you, it would make me happy. Picture this: You've had a pretty rotten day, you get on Kidpub, start looking at all the stories and such, but then you see it. The post with (in the title) the title to one of your stories. You automatically click it and then BAM you are either reading a review about your book that is either positive or negative. You're either happy or determined to write better, if you take the review professionally and if the reviewer reviewed your story in a professional manner. Anyway, I'm here with an idea inspired by Max's post. I'm so surprised that I haven't came up with it before. Who here on Kidpub would like me to review their story. I may not have time to read all FORTY chapters (if you have written that many) but I'll have time to read a decent amount that can help me define your story. Please fill out this form and post it in a comment and BAM your story will be reviewed.

Form:

Name/username:

Name of story:

How many chapters are out?:

Link:

 

If you are too lazy or too tired to get me a link, that is alright. I'll just have to find it myself but I would really appreciate it if you gave me a link. It's as easy as one, two, three. If you have multiple stories you want me to review, copy and paste the form multiple times. I can also review a poem or a song. I would prefer it if you had a bunch of poems and songs, maybe 'bout three? That I can review all in one post. This is my grading system:

A + = 10 stars

A = 9.5 stars

A- = 9 stars

B + = 8.5 stars

B = 8 stars

B - = 7.5 stars

C + = 7 stars

C = 6.5 stars

C - = 6 stars

D + = 5.5 stars

D = 5 stars

D - = 4 stars

F = under four stars

 

I doubt any of your stories will be graded an F. Now, as I read more of your story after I review it. The grade may change. If I feel it needs to be changed. If I feel your story has improved. Remember, don't take it too emotionally if your story get's graded loow. Which I doubt any story will be graded low but hey! you never know. But instead of taking it as an insult or taking it the wrong way, try to professionally take the grade as it is and try to make that grade higher. Go to various websites and find new writing techniques an such. Most writers like reading so read more stories and just practice. No one is born a doctor, teacher, or even an amazing writer. We all work to get there. Always remember that my friends. All of us worked to get where we are now. And that's the only secret, practice, practice and more practice.  Anyone can write amazing stories if they just try. And complaining and getting upset by those who have succeeded in life doesn't give you time to practice. Stop looking at other's work and start working on yours.

Keep an eye out for you're review! It may come when you least expect it.

        Until next time,

                          NightOwl0_0

 


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I think you've read Time of

I think you've read Time of the Shadow People

 

Anyways

name: Kathryn

Name of story: Time of the Shadow People

How many chapters are out:11

Link:

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/chapter-1-5-time-shadow-people-plus-cover-pictures-and-updates-69288896

I know the story is pretty bad, and its crappy, but I want to publish so I need opinions.

I've always wanted to put a funny quote from my life into a sig. But there are to many and frankly they won't fit in the sig box!!

Posted by Kathryn on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:33
This is a really kind thing

This is a really kind thing to do NightOwlO_O. It is so, so kind to do. I think I might join you in this, too, if you'd like me too :D!!!

 

But, anyway:

 

 

Name/username: Username: DreamWriter/ Name: Mysty or Moon

Name of story: Dreamer

How many chapters are out?:  Four.... I think XD

Link:http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/kidpub-story-85887795

 

 

"It is the very error of the moon; she comes more near the earth than she was wont, and makes men mad." --- William Shakespeare (1564-1616), English playwright and poet, Othello "I was stuck in between two handsome idiots that joined a cursed army and

Posted by Moon (Mysty) on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:38
Yeah you can join! I have my

Yeah you can join! I have my own review series though but I'm not stopping you from making you're own review series. Mine is, IMMAReviewer....yours can be whatever you want. It would be totally awesome! It's fine. YOu can use the grading system too!

 

“We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves to others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves. “François Duc de La Rochefoucauld *

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:45
Or did you have something

Or did you have something else in mind ? 0_o

“We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves to others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves. “François Duc de La Rochefoucauld *

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:45
Name:CD Name of Book: The

Name:CD

Name of Book: The Dragon's Heir

# of Ch: 5

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/the-dragons-heir-porolouge-almecer

If you want to help Dylan Carmer defeat the Nazis, click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/lost-saga-book-i-island-ch-i-... If you want to ride a dragon with Lestran Delarshanks, click on this: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-

Posted by The_X_Writer [CD] on Tue, 02/15/2011 - 17:34
Name: Pokey Story title:

Name: Pokey
Story title: Shadow Shifters
Chapters out: 9
Link: Ugh, I'm SO sorry, Becca, Ic'm on my nook write now and i cant copy links...thats also why my spelling is poor-its really hard to type. On a touchscreen. GRRRR!

Please read/buy my published book, The Stones of Coromatto! http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/the-stones-of-coromatto/14303564?p...

Posted by Pokey on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:50
OMG, Rebecca!  Amazing

OMG, Rebecca!  Amazing idea!  do you mind if I review some/ post one of my own (whatever you want)???

"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:52
Yeah sure go ahead!! It's

Yeah sure go ahead!! It's not like I can stop you. I think it's a good idea kidpubbers are sorta copying this idea. The more reviewers the more the reviews, right?

 

“We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves to others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves. “François Duc de La Rochefoucauld *

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:53
Okay thx!"Fearless is not

Okay thx!
"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 20:54
Oooh, great idea! Well, if

Oooh, great idea! Well, if you get around to it, I would like you to review my story, Saber of the Guard (SOG). The link to the prologue/summary is in my sig, and all the chapters are linked together. I've only released up to chapter 6 part 1 (part 2 is under construction).

Form:

Name/username: Leloo

Name of story: Saber of the Guard

How many chapters are out?: 6.5, plus prologue

Link: In my signature... *see below*

Thank you!

Do you want to be a slave to your power, or a soldier to it? ~Saber of the Guard: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/saber-guard-summary-and-prolo...

Posted by Leloo on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:00
I posted almost the same

I posted almost the same thing.  Do mine if you want 2 reviews!!!
 it's on NS

"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:02
Form: Novel Name/username:

Form: Novel

Name/username: Kt

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/my-novel-assassins-son-chapters-1-4-edited-please-tell-me-what-you-think-i-will 

Name of story: The Assassin's Son 

How many chapters are out?: All 30 (30 is the last chapter)  LL           kdjg

 

 

"How will we know when the great Destruction is near? The lights will go out, one by one like dreams at daybreak. The Prison will close it's eyes against the sufferings of it's children." - Lord Calliston's Diary from Catherine Fisher's "Sapphique".

Posted by Kt on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:02
  Name/username: Vampire

 

Name/username: Vampire Writer

Name of story: Broken Light

How many chapters are out?: 22, I think

Link:  Go to my tracker, and it  go to my tracker, it should be pretty recent

 

 

"Dobby has no master. Dobby is a free elf, and he has come to rescue Harry Potter and his friends!" ~Dobby

Posted by Lily09 on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:16
Hey Kidpubbers! If you want

Hey Kidpubbers! If you want MULTIPLE reviews by THREE DIFFERENT PEOPLE!! Both ForeverMyDraco and Moon (mysty) asked permission and I said it would be okay if they did the same thing:

ForeverMyDraco's: http://www.kidpub.com/story/do-you-want-review-read-92293714

Moon's: http://www.kidpub.com/story/yes-another-review-thinger-um-click-if-you-w...

 

You know you want to....:D

“We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves to others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves. “François Duc de La Rochefoucauld *

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:21
OMPJ, I keep thinking your

OMPJ, I keep thinking your Jack D for some reason! I wondered why Pokey called you Becca........sorry about that. :D

Great idea!!!!!!!!

Name: Rachel

Name of Story: Dreamwalker (Because I know you reviewed Shadows....but you read Dreamwalker, right???)

How many chapters: 18 or 19 and it's finished.

Link: Do you need a link since you read it??? I'll give you a link anyways: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/dreamwalker-chapter-one-repost-89787211

If youThanks IMMAVDF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't follow your dreams; chase them.~Richard Dumb

Posted by Rachel on Mon, 01/10/2011 - 21:48
OoOoOoOHhHhHhHh that sounds

OoOoOoOHhHhHhHh that sounds really awesome

 

xD

Posted by Melody on Tue, 01/11/2011 - 00:35
please read my books deadly

please read my books deadly secrets, flight for freedom and Lavender fields "You're replacing me"-Lisa Simpson "ahhh sweety dumping is such a harsh word lets just say i'm replacing you"-Homer Simpson

Name/username:Maxiboy :P!

Name of story :Lost

How many chapters are out:6

Link;http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/lost-chapter-1-74789083

yay!

Posted by Maxiboy!! :P on Tue, 01/11/2011 - 05:49
  Name/username:

 

Name/username: Camille

Name of story: The Squirrel Hunters

How many chapters are out?: 2

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/squirrel-hunters-chapter-one-morning-joe-its-so-awesome-79190377

 

Bless this highly nutritious microwavable macaroni and cheese dinner and the people who sold it on sale. Amen. -Kevin, Home Alone

Posted by Camille and Dominick on Tue, 01/11/2011 - 08:59
Hey, IMMAVDF, I HAVE YOUR

Hey, IMMAVDF, I HAVE YOUR REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Here's the link:

 

http://www.kidpub.com/book-review/mystymoonreviews1-curse-zombie-slayer-85893809

 

Yep!!! 

 

 

 

"It is the very error of the moon; she comes more near the earth than she was wont, and makes men mad." --- William Shakespeare (1564-1616), English playwright and poet, Othello "I was stuck in between two handsome idiots that joined a cursed army and

Posted by Moon (Mysty) on Tue, 01/11/2011 - 22:58
please read my books deadly

please read my books deadly secrets, flight for freedom and Lavender fields "You're replacing me"-Lisa Simpson "ahhh sweety dumping is such a harsh word lets just say i'm replacing you"-Homer Simpson

im still sad because no one did a review on me. immavampirediaries fan can you plz do a review one of my books!

Posted by Maxiboy!! :P on Thu, 01/13/2011 - 19:15
  Form: Name/username:

 

Form:

Name/username: CHIAKI

Name of story: THE OTHER WHERE

How many chapters are out?: SIX

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/other-where-chapter-1-my-first-chapter-book-please-comment-85984250

"No matter how strong and firm one appears, the cracks are always there." -Mingling Souls, K.R. Galvin

Posted by Chiaki on Tue, 01/18/2011 - 20:50
Name/username:

Name/username: Clover                my username is Meep101

Name of story: A Pebble in the Water    

How many chapters are out?: seven

Link:?http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954           

 

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954    this is the link to the 1st chapter. It gets more intresting as you go along, I belive.

Thanks!

***Clover

*Meep*http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954  http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954 http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954 http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/pebble-water-chapter-1-96792954 

Posted by Clover on Thu, 01/27/2011 - 13:51
Name DayDreamer (Anne) Story

Name DayDreamer (Anne)
Story name the fallen orb
Chapters 2
Link http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/fallen-orbchapter-1-92493126
This is really nice to do for everyone thank u so much

In dreams begin responsibilities. - Cornelius Tower (from tower prep)

Posted by DayDreamer (Anne) on Thu, 01/27/2011 - 15:05
  Name/username:

 

Name/username: Mickky

Name of story: Helena Avery Secrets

How many chapters are out?: 4

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/helena-avery-secrets-chapter-1-96495200 that's the 1st chapter

Thanks!

*Mickky*

 

NOMINATE HERE!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!! VOTE!!!! http://www.kidpub.com/story/our-new-nominations-hosted-byme-96495482

Posted by Mickky on Tue, 02/01/2011 - 19:32
Form: Script Name/username:

Form: Script

Name/username: Xaxvier

Name of story: For Us, The Damned (Script)

How many chapters are out?: 69

Link:http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/us-damned-script-chapt-i-over-79879933     

 

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/us-damned-script-chapt-i-over-7987993

\3http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/us-damned-script-chapt-i-over-79879933  

 That's the link ot episode I. However, there's also a prolouge. whether or not you read that is up to you.

"I will never be a memory," -- Sepheroth, Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children 

Posted by Derk4theBest on Sat, 02/05/2011 - 15:42
Hey, this is awesome! What a

Hey, this is awesome! What a great idea!

Form:

Name/username: Sarah

Names of poems: The Musician, Michelangelo, One: A Poem, Blessings (sorry, i know this is a lot, but like no one has commented as of yet)

How many chapters are out?: idk, they aren't chapter books

Link: 

http://www.kidpub.com/story/musician-47196156 

http://www.kidpub.com/story/michelangelo-47196147 

http://www.kidpub.com/story/one-poem-please-read-and-comment-and-i-will-do-same-you-47196148 

http://www.kidpub.com/story/blessings-47196149 

 

If you can't do all of them i understand! but i would appreciate if you just read. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!

Posted by Sarah on Wed, 02/09/2011 - 14:44
Cool! I can't wait to read

Cool! I can't wait to read them! I have to read all the other stories that were in line first because like...it wouldn't be fair otherwise but I'm lookin' forward to reading your poems!

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Wed, 02/09/2011 - 15:17
Name:Audrey/Nyteris-spirit Na

Name:Audrey/Nyteris-spirit
Name of story:part one chp one of Nyteria series
# of chps: 1/separated into two parts
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/debut-author-part-one-chp-one-nyteria-series...

Posted by Audrey on Tue, 02/15/2011 - 00:49
Name:CD Name of Book: The

Name:CD

Name of Book: The Dragon's Heir

# of Ch: 5

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/the-dragons-heir-porolouge-almecer

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Tue, 02/15/2011 - 18:49
Name/username: Destiny Name

Name/username: Destiny

Name of story: Aqua Skies

How many chapters are out?: 5

Link:

www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/aqua-skies-chapter-1-amulet-93196001

THANKS FOR DOING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Fantasy starts with the sky."~ Krissy from Aqua Skies (My story)

Posted by strawberry on Wed, 02/16/2011 - 04:16
No problem :)  I will try

No problem :)  I will try and do the others as fast as possible than I'll do yours. I'll probably review yours next week or so...maybe sooner! Becuase I still have ten reviews to write before yours. I'll try and do them as soon as possible!

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Wed, 02/16/2011 - 11:46
  Name/username: Max Name

 

Name/username: Max

Name of story:  Future Wars

How many chapters are out?: 2

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/future-wars-book-1-chapter-1-life-girl-74795355

 

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Wed, 02/16/2011 - 15:57
  Form: Huh? Name/username:

 

Form: Huh?

Name/username: Haley

Name of story: Uhh.. I don't really have one yet

How many chapters are out?: 2

Link:  http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-plz-suggest-titles-chapter-one-172496135

 

 

 

 

 

 

Check out my writing site http://kidswriteforever.webs.com/

Posted by Haley on Sun, 02/27/2011 - 13:58
Alicia Story: This is where

Alicia

Story: This is where i belong

Chapters: I have four chapters on this website, but here is the link to chapter 1:

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/1st-chapter-inuit-eskimo-stor...

Thank you sooo much, and if it is possible, could you write the review as a comment for my story???

Thank you!!!

Posted by Alicia on Mon, 03/14/2011 - 11:25
Cool! I can't wait to read

Cool! I can't wait to read it! Um...I usually comment on the stories I review and write an actual review that will be on the NSP (newest stories page) And there is a bit of a line but I promise I'll hurry up!!!!!! I'll add you to the list!! again, can't wait to read it!

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 03/14/2011 - 14:16
No, not yet. I'm so sorry

No, not yet. I'm so sorry but theres still a few more in front of you but I promise to hurry up! I'm going to try and get two reviews done today

You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/some-no-big-deal-others-dream-come-true-plea...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Mon, 03/14/2011 - 16:02
Okay taht's fine I'm happy

Okay taht's fine I'm happy to get one at all....Oh and actully there is 2 chappies out now...

 

Please buy/ look at my books!

http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/way-up-high-a-book-of-poetry-...

http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/kids-fun-journal-book-1/10269...

Posted by Haley :) on Mon, 03/14/2011 - 16:08
Didya ever do mine? XD Never

Didya ever do mine? XD

Never give up. Even in your darkest hour never, never give up ~ Soon to come in the Nyteria series XD

http://www.kidpub.com/story/debut-author-part-one-chp-one-nyteria-series...

Posted by Audrey on Sun, 04/03/2011 - 01:51
No, not yet. But I will

No, not yet. But I will soon.

"It only takes a few words and BAM...everything's okay." -Me!
You want me to review YOUR story? Click this link: http://www.kidpub.com/story/hello-yeah-you-click-post-trust-me-your-gonn...

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (IM... on Sun, 04/03/2011 - 09:21
Didya ever do mine?

Didya ever do mine? XD

Ooopps posted twice

Never give up. Even in your darkest hour never, never give up ~ Soon to come in the Nyteria series XD

http://www.kidpub.com/story/debut-author-part-one-chp-one-nyteria-series...

Posted by Nyteris-Spirit on Sun, 04/03/2011 - 01:53
Well, I'm breaking down...

Well, I'm breaking down...  Would you mind doing one of mine??

Thanks!!

--FMD

Name: Untitled Fantasy

User: FMD

Chapters: 1 so far, they're like 10 pages long on Word.

Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-fantasy-please-read-needs-ton-cc-chapter-1-92295404

Thank youuu!

Feel like reading an action/romance/adventure story?? Then read this: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/new-untitled-realistic-fictio... Thanks! Love, FMD

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Sun, 04/03/2011 - 06:32

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