Something random
Posted May 9th, 2023 by BohemianRhapsod...
in Utah
May 9th, 2023
A scream tore through the sky, a scream of pure agony, death, pain, you could say. The sound of large, furry paws stepped away from the remains, while a tall figure was speeding through the forest, looking for the screamer. The forest was but a blur of green and brown as he sped through it, not minding the branches hitting his face, the bugs biting him, the dog running after him. He lept over a log, over a river, until he found the victim.
It was a mess, to say the least.
It was a human, vaguely, if you could look past the missing arm, leg, chunk of head, and the tear through the middle of the chest, letting organs spill out, and nothing was left of the heart. A mess of blood covered the body, obscuring the face, uncleanable at this point. You could see where the arm had been brutally torn off, and a few ribs were sticking out of the torn torso. The man grimaced at the sight, too unbearable to see.
He heard a growling behind him, and quickly turned to see a massive monster, ten feet tall, with feet disproportinately large for the body. It was covered in fur, and had a huge snout with thousands of teeth inside. It had spikes running down its back, and massive claws that could probably tear a car apart in seconds. The mouth had a chunk of flesh, presumably from the body. The creature slashed his claws, intending to smack him into a tree. Dodging it, he pulled out a small pistol. He tried to take aim while simultaneously dodging the attacks, and he had an open spot to aim when-
WHAM!!!
The creature had smacked him in the side with a huge claw, and he felt something warm and wet cover his head. Blood. As he hit the tree, he waited for the creature to kill him, certain doom awaiting.
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wow
i would like to see a little more description but that was amazing
(somethings wrong with me: i love this)
“You have never been worthless.” ~Hlimya, Moondragon https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/moondragon-cover-3392164114
Why do you want more description? Like, of the corpse?
There is a lot we don't know. Some would say we know enough. Others, like me, would say that we should strive to learn as much as we possibly can. -Me, 2023
just of the time of day, sensory deatails, etc. Also i thought it ended too soon. you should read Jurrasic Park to get idea's of how to write a death that will really shake your readers (the deaths in Jurrasic park were... gory, to say the least)
“You have never been worthless.” ~Hlimya, Moondragon https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/moondragon-cover-3392164114
YOU'VE READ JURASSIC PARK?! THAT BOOK'S SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There is a lot we don't know. Some would say we know enough. Others, like me, would say that we should strive to learn as much as we possibly can. -Me, 2023
I KNOW!!! ITS AMAZING ISN'T IT?
(why am i typing in caps?)
BECAUSE JURRASIC PARK IS AWESOME!
“You have never been worthless.” ~Hlimya, Moondragon https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/moondragon-cover-3392164114