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starlit party (for Alem's Nature Poem Contest)

starlit party (for Alem's Nature Poem Contest)

Posted August 12th, 2017 by FrostBittenKitten

by unlucky clover {luna}
in The heights

August 12th, 2017

the stars in the sky

look like tiny specks of glitter 

on a black canvas

the crickets chirping 

is all the music i need

taking off my headphones

immersing myself in this new world

the air wrapping around me like a blanket

 

the moon is like the disco ball

at this strange quiet party

but there are no crowds here

no heat from the dozens of sweaty bodies

the crickets and i are the only guests at this party

 

laying back in the grass

its strands tickling my body

my hair a mess under me

but there is no one to care

i take a deep breath

i like being here alone

 

i look at the stars

trying to find the constellations

wondering silently the things i don't say out loud

it's so peaceful and serene

i don't know why more people don't do this 

 

so what if i am a dreamer

all alone with the sounds of nature

there is no one to care here

in my own little haven

nighttime is so different from the blinding light of day

the stars glittering above me

 

after a while i decide it's time to go

i need to get back to the business of life

the stress and the hurry

even if i don't want to

so i leave my perfect little party

and i go inside

putting my headphones back on

making myself look pretty

because people care again

because i care

but i won't forget my starlit party


See more stories by unlucky clover {luna}
I liked how you emphasized

I liked how you emphasized the difference between the world of nature and the world of men, the starlight party and the club party.

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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* Chrysostom on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 16:18
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Posted by palaces out of ... on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 21:35
oml I love this I love

oml I love this I love everything about this this is surely going to win favouriting omlll

 

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Posted by there's a snake on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 16:35
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Posted by palaces out of ... on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 21:36
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Beautiful.
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“There is something delicious about writing the first words of a story. You never quite know where they'll take you.”
- Beatrix Potter

Posted by Dolphin *Alem* on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 19:16
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Posted by palaces out of ... on Sat, 08/12/2017 - 21:36
I Love this poem, and all

I Love this poem, and all the others in the nature poem contest, I love how a lot of them are about steping away from the rest of the world into nature and I think you've really brought that out here.

"Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none." - Shakespeare

Posted by Vivace on Wed, 08/23/2017 - 15:24
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Posted by palaces out of ... on Wed, 08/23/2017 - 19:27

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