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Posted May 14th, 2018 by Billy

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by Briana
in New York

May 14th, 2018

Rhythm is soaring

and the pearl snow blankets

A white dove dusted in soot

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So short, but such a lovely

So short, but such a lovely image.

(Oh, also, I see what you did there with the syllables. 5, 6, 7. Clever. I'll make a little one in the comments just to try it out.)

If the dove should stir

White wings beating soft ice,

She will leave an angel's shape.


Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* Revival on Fri, 05/18/2018 - 12:28
Thanks! I like yours really

Thanks! I like yours really good! Yup haha practicing syllable layouts

Posted by Briana on Mon, 05/21/2018 - 20:30

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