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Written At 10:50 PM

Posted August 23rd, 2018 by Gracithe1andonly

by *Snow*
in wardly searching

August 23rd, 2018

A million fragmented individual

Pieces of light with a residual

Longing to commune again.

 

Seven steps upward; reparation

Made for every abomination,

Seven steps plus three adds to ten.

 

A dream in a dream in a dream; confession,

We were flawed from our conception,

Yet still we all know we are chosen and called.

 

Oh for the sake of the love in your heart

Let yourself die to not fall apart,

And go by the gate to the garden that's walled.

 


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snow ahhhh this is so

snow ahhhh this is so incredible!! i love the phrasing and quiet rhyming and it’s just super intriguing and soft and <3 faved!

Posted by swallowtail on Thu, 08/23/2018 - 22:40
ahhhhh thank you so much! it

ahhhhh thank you so much! it was inspired by this wacky student movie I saw called "The Extrovert" and then my friends were driving me home as I typed this in the weird mood that ensued. I'd hoped it would be soft and intriguing!! 

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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Fri, 08/24/2018 - 17:35
i wish i could write this

i wish i could write this well oml

AHHH teach me your ways

Posted by Cinnamon on Fri, 08/24/2018 - 16:30
my ways are five years of

my ways are five years of nearly constant practice

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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Fri, 08/24/2018 - 17:35
oh, i love this one, it

oh, i love this one, it makes me think of space and floating and a spacey person thinking. Idk i just really like it.

"They say before you start a war/ you better know what you're fighting for" ~ Angel with a Shotgun; The Cab

Posted by Unclever Re on Sat, 08/25/2018 - 12:51
i am a v spacey person thank

i am a v spacey person thank you re, thank you so much for taking the time to comment on this

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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Sat, 08/25/2018 - 17:59

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