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*zodiac poetry: Leo *Roses*

*zodiac poetry: Leo *Roses*

Posted March 11th, 2018 by Billy

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by Briana
in New York

March 11th, 2018

So what of the roses that make up my mind
Roses are flammable that's what I've come to find
The firey passion
Strirring inside
as flames rise
And burn away
All the remains
With a sweet scented blaze

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I like this! Usually, people

I like this!
Usually, people associate roses with blood, wine, chocolate, etc. Combining fire and roses is unique, but you made it work!
My only CC: I couldn't get a feel for the rhythm. Maybe if you made it longer, it would be easier to get into without getting cut off too soon.
Great job! Please keep writing these!
Btw, I'm a Libra, so I'll be expecting my poem soon. ;)

Life is tough, darling, but so are you. ~Stephanie Bennett-Henry

Posted by subparshakespea... on Sun, 03/25/2018 - 22:24

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